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Rabu, 22 Mei 2019

KULIAH SAMBIL KERJA BUKAN MASALAH!! Mahasiswa TBI Mandiri.

 
Dikampus IAIN Palangka Raya sendiri, umumnya masih sangat minim mahasiswa yang memutuskan untuk kuliah sambil bekerja. Berbeda dengan Muhammad Yuswana. Mahasiswa semester 6 program studi Tadris Bahasa Inggris FTIK IAIN Palangka Raya. Berasal dari keluarga yang berlatar belakang kurang mampu, memaksa dirinya untuk kuliah sambil bekerja. Ditengah sibuknya perkuliahan dan tugas-tugas dia mampu menyisihkan sebagian waktunya untuk bekerja.

Karena dalam perjalanan kuliah membutuhkan dana tambahan, misalnya untuk biaya sewa kos, transportasi, makan, beli buku dan foto copy tugas. Hal itu memerlukan biaya yang tidak sedikit, oleh sebab itu dia berfikir untuk mencari aktivitas sampingan yang dapat menghasilkan uang, dan meringkan sedikit beban orang tuanya.saya hanya ingin mencoba mandiri dan membantu meringankan beban kedua orang tua saya. Karena, sebagai mahasiswa bukankah memang sudah seharusnya  kita memiliki pola pikir yang kreatif dan berfikir kedepan” ujar Muhammad Yuswana ketika diwawancarai.
Dia memutuskan untuk mulai bekerja saat berada disemester 2. Berkat kerja keras dan usahnya, Alhamadulillah saat ini dia sudah mampu membiayai hidup dan kuliahnya sendiri, bahkan terkadang dia mampu mengirimkan uang untuk membantu penghidupan orangtuanya dikampung. 
Banyak yang mengatakan bahwa kuliah di universitas negeri sangat sulit jika harus kuliah sambil bekerja karena seperti yang kita ketahui universitas negeri memiliki jadwal yang sangat padat. “Jalani saja, tetap semangat dengan kesibukan. Mumpung masih muda, banyak-banyakin pengalaman dan tidak ada alasan untuk kita bermalas-malasan apalagi malas belajar dan menempuh pendidikan ataupun mimpi terbaik. Yang pasti harus pandai memanajemen waktu dengan baik agar tugas kampus dan tugas diluar bisa seimbang.Pesannya kepada Mahasiswa IAIN Palangka Raya lainnya.
Nyatanya selama kita punya tekad dan niat, selalu ada jalan untuk menempuh pendidikan dan mencari ilmu lebih banyak lagi. Tak peduli berapa usia kita, bagaimana kondisi ekonomi kita dan sesibuk apapun pekerjaan kita, Tuhan akan selalu menunjukkan jalan untuk kita agar terus bisa menempuh pendidikan yang kita inginkan dan butuhkan.

Dinarasikan: my/edu/10 April 2019

Selasa, 29 Mei 2018


WORKSHEET

 #Task 1
Welcome:
Introduction to Argumentative Writing – about smoking be banned?
Description: An argumentative writing or essay is a genre of writing that requires the student to investigate a topic, collect, generate, and evaluate evidence, and establish a position on the topic in a concise manner. In this WebQuest, you'll learn to develop points or arguments and counter-points on the issue of Smoking be banned!
Curriculum: English
Keywords: Argumentative essay, smoking be banned
Author(s): Muhammad Yuswana
Introduction:
You are taking the journey to explore the basic structure, techniques and steps to write a good argumentative essay and how you can persuade and present well-reasoned arguments on a debatable issue-Is smoking be banned?
Before you start, watch this video soking be banned below!
 
Task:
Imagine, you are a researcher in a group of three and your task is to investigate, gather and develop ideas or information on either one of these below:
  1. the structure of an argumentative essay
  2. the steps in writing a good argumentative essay and
  3. the techniques or approaches in writing a good argumentative essay
  4. Present your group report in 5-10 minutes!
Your next journey is to do research on the issue of snoking be banned! Develop and write at least 3 argumentative points and 3 counter-points on this issue ! Remember, you have to take a firm stance on this issue. Be daring to tell or relate to others how things should be! Provide reasons to support all your claims and refute the opposing side of each argument points. Don't forget to cite experts who agree with you!
Resources

  
Procces
Most academic essays will require you to present an argument through reasoning and the use of evidence. In the process of planning and drafting your essay, you will need to respond to the assigned question by thinking, reading and writing your way to a considered position/stance, or thesis statement. The thesis statement is expressed as one or two sentences in the introductory paragraph of your essay, and supported in the body of the essay by a series of topic sentences, one in each paragraph. Each topic sentence is in turn supported by evidence and examples from your readings and research, reflection, observation and analysis.
Your essay should connect your thesis/focus statement and the major points you make to support it (your topic sentences). It should also connect the topic sentences with the evidence and examples you use to develop and illustrate them. Failing to provide an adequate, workable thesis/focus statement or failing to support it or ‘stick to it’ are two of the more common mistakes made by undergraduate essay writers.
Each of you takes the role as a researcher to explore, investigate and write a report on each topic: the structure of an argumentative essay, the steps in writing a good argumentative essay and the technique or approach to write a good argumentative essay. Then, combine your work on these topics and present your findings to the class. Use large charts or posters to present! 
Next, read the articles given and watch the videos on the issue of video games and why should it be banned for the minors. Discuss in your group and list down all the pros and cons using the T-chart organizer. Then, each of you decide what stance to take, whether playing video games is bad or the opposite and why violent video games should be banned for the minors or vice-versa.Write your argumentative essay in 350 words using a good thesis statement and the minimal five-part structure you have already learnt. Post and share your work in the classroom blog created by your teacher for assessment and comments.  

Evaluation:
Your work will be evaluated according to the evaluation rubric below. The main task is the argumentative essay and this is evaluated based on the criteria and standard given in MUET (Malaysian University English Test). The total score for your report presentation, group participation and argumentative essay is 100%. 
Rubic:
Rubric of the Argumentative Essay
10
8
6
4   |  0
The well-developed INTRODUCTION engages the readers.  It contains detailed background information, develops a significant and compelling position, and a clear explanation or definition of the problem. Finally, it creates interest in the topic.
The satisfactory introduction contains some background information, uses a technique for creating interest, develops a clearly stated position, and states the problem, using sufficient details.



Introduction does not adequately explain the background of the problem nor does the writer attempt to create interest.  The problem is stated, but lacks detail. The introduction is evident, but position may not be clearly stated.


Writer does not attempt to create interest. Background details are a seemingly random collection of information, unclear, or not related to the topic. The problem is not stated or it is vague.  Introduction is vague or fails to establish a position that responds to the topic.
The well-formed, perceptive, and properly placed THESIS STATEMENT clearly states the writer’s position. 
The clear and properly placed thesis statement obviously states the writer’s position. 

The thesis statement is present; however, it does not clearly state the writer’s position and/or it is improperly placed.
The thesis statement is vague/unclear, improperly placed, and/or does not clearly state the writer’s position; thus making the text difficult or impossible to follow. 
30
20      |     14
10       |    8
6         |     0
MAIN POINTS are well developed and directly related to the thesis.  The supporting details are concrete and so rich that the readers learn by reading the essay.  The writer is obviously in control/comfortable with his/her material and knows enough about the subject to explain it in great detail.

Support uses appropriate patterns of development and style.  Each aspect relates to thesis, providing coherence and continuity.
Main points are present and directly related to the thesis, but one or more may lack enough detail and development.  Yet, the essay is worthwhile reading.  The writer knows his/her material well enough to clearly explain it.

Patterns of development used for support and the style are not necessarily appropriate.  Each aspect of argument is present, but the writer may not have shown connection to thesis.
Main points are present, but one or more may lack development and/or may not directly relate to the thesis.  The essay minimally meets the requirements of the assignment and contains sufficient details to make the overall point clear, but it leaves the reader with unanswered questions.

Support for argument is logical, but pattern of development and style is simplistic.  Some aspects of argument do not relate to thesis.
The main points are not sufficient.  There is a poor/skimpy/ vague development of ideas and a weak or nonexistent link to the thesis. 

Body is too brief to develop a convincing argument; exhibits no style.  Essay lacks focus and tends to wander.


10
8
6
4         |       0
Powerful CONCLUSION effectively wraps up point and goes beyond restating the thesis/ introduction. Conclusion summarizes the main topics without repeating.  The writer's commentary is logical, well thought out, and compelling.
Conclusion effectively summarizes main topics and goes beyond restating the thesis.  Conclusion may lack a compelling aspect.

Conclusion summarizes main topics, but is repetitive. Conclusion may end abruptly or simply restate the position
Conclusion does not adequately summarize the main points.
10
9      |      8
7      |      6
5        |      0
Logical, compelling ORGANIZATION
progression of ideas in essay; clear structure which enhances and showcases the central idea or theme and moves the reader through the text. Organization flows so smoothly the reader hardly thinks about it. Effective, mature, graceful transitions exist throughout the essay.
Overall, the paper is logically developed.  Progression of ideas in essay makes sense and moves the reader easily through the text.
Strong transitions exist throughout and add to the essay’s coherence.
Progression of ideas in essay is awkward, yet moves the reader through the text without too much confusion. The writer sometimes lunges ahead too quickly or spends too much time on details that do not matter.
Transitions appear sporadically, but not equally throughout essay.
Arrangement of essay is unclear and illogical.  The writing lacks a clear sense of direction. Ideas, details or events seem strung together in a loose or random fashion; there is no identifiable internal structure and readers have trouble following the writer’s line of thought.
Few, forced transitions in the essay or no transitions are present.

5
4
3
2         |       0
MECHANICS AND STYLE

Writing is smooth, skillful, and coherent throughout the essay. 
Sentences are well built with strong and varied structure that invites expressive oral reading.
Diction is at a college level or the appropriate level for the audience.
Punctuation, spelling, and capitalization are correct.
Virtually error free
Writing is smooth and coherent throughout most of the essay.
Most sentences are varied in length and style, with an occasional (1 or 2) repetition of sentence beginnings or a number of consecutive sentences of the same length or type.  The sentence structure is generally correct, though some awkward sentences do appear.
Diction is mostly at the college level, but may have some examples of unsophisticated or poor/incorrect word choices.
There are one or two errors in punctuation, spelling, capitalization and/or other mechanics.
Few, if any, errors distract the reader from the text.
Writing lacks flow to achieve coherence throughout the essay.
Work contains some sentence errors (2 or 3) and grammatical errors. Many consecutive sentences begin with the same words, are of the same length or the same sentence construction; the sentences hang together, and get the job done in a routine fashion. 
Diction is very elementary and lacks flair.
There are three or four errors in punctuation, spelling, capitalization, and/or other mechanics. 
Errors are distracting; however, the reader can still follow the basic intentions of the writer.
Writing is incoherent.
Work contains multiple incorrect sentence structures (more than 3).
Diction is elementary and/or inappropriate, and often writing is awkward due to many examples of poor/incorrect word choice.
There are more than 4 errors in punctuation, spelling, capitalization, and/or other mechanics.
 Errors are beyond distracting; they make the essay difficult to follow and unacceptable for college-level writing.
10
8
6
4     |     0
All source material is used and smoothly integrated into the text. All sources are accurately documented and in the desired format on the WORKS CITED PAGE.
All sources are relevant and reliable. In Text Citation done properly.
All source material is used. All sources are accurately documented, but a few are not in the desired format on the Works Cited page.
Most sources are relevant and reliable. In Text Citation mostly done properly.

Sources are accurately documented, but many are not in the desired format on the Works Cited page. Some sources are relevant and reliable. In Text Citation done  but not properly.

Lacks sources and/or sources are not accurately documented. Incorrect format is used.
Sources are not relevant nor reliable.
No In Text citation.

Total out of  _______________/75

Conclusion:
Congratulations and Well Done!
You have accomplished your tasks!
In your journey of exploration, you have learnt the important skills to write a good argumentative essay! As a researcher, you have gathered some information on the structure, steps and techniques to write a good argumentative essay. Are there any other important tips on how to write a good argumentative essay? What are some of the tips or guidance given by experts or tutors?   
You have also taken the challenge to work collaboratively and prepare charts or posters to present your group report!  You have also successfully accomplished the task in writing the argumentative essay on the issue of smoking be banned!

Resources:
1.Websites
2.Video Clips


Playing Video Games : Good or Bad ? #Task 2

              Video games always provide a great pass time activity for children these games are so many and so addictive that when a child is not controlled, he can spend all his time playing the games. The games a child plays can be a good or a bad thing in his life, for example children, who learn how to play chess at a tender age usually show signs of high levels of intellect. However, the some case does not apply for violent video games.
             The effect of violent video games are as varied as the number of the games. One effect that is common with all of them is there addiction. This can be a terrible thing because a child make not do any productive activity whenever at home. This means that he does not study when at home or even do his assignment consequently, his performance at school differently deteriorates, moreover the child could salience development of his talent such as attending a music class just for the purpose of playing a violent game.
            Another effect that has caused replace among parents and the society in general is the possible violent behavior in children. Controlled experiment place little emphasis on this relationship. The obtained result show that the negative effect of such game are quit minimal.
          There is also an observation regarding these game and their players where children who are naturally aggressive prefer playing this type or game to another. This observation waters down the chance of violent game leading to violent behavior in children when in viewed, some kids who play this type of game say that they are not negatively affected by the game. This is definitely batched up by there not violent behavior. It has also been observed that violence this played on television such as in action movies or news has more chances of leading to violence in children that the violent games. However, it is important to note that when a child plays a violent game he is likely to experience. Some phsyichological  include an increase of both heart rate and brain activity.
          In conclusion it is safe to say that violent generally lend to violent behavior in children because of their nature which can deter a child growth.